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I agree with what *patrickbrown has written. In addition to what Pat mentioned. I would add that because of the direction Wrath (eyepatch guy) is coming from. I don't think there would be any parks coming off of Greeds armored arm. Well not in the direction it is going. If you were to say that they are both so quick. Then I would say you would have an arced line of sparks coming from somewhere near behind Wraths head over to where his arm is now. This is based off of my idea that Greed has spun around from the left side of the image as Wrath has passed him.
Something you could look into would be, adding some very soft hint of reflected light from Greeds red lit arm, and or the sparks if you are happy with where they are. I under stand that maybe these aren't the biggest of light sources but I could help draw focus to the energy the two characters have in this image. The ground although done well seems a little uniform and and doesn't add to the dynamicness of the image that the characters bring.
Also be carefull with your light sources. The two characters faces lit up the way you have done seems to me that the faces almost have their own light source. Your colours are great. Very good colour palette. I think you should have a play around with making the shadows a little darker in areas, as this could help make the image pop more too.
Hope this critique is what you are looking for.
Ben Parry
VISION:
At first look you can instantly see that it's a great piece of art, the way you've done the poses work perfectly. You probably know this already but the key to a great pose is to imagine how it would look as a silhouette. The flow in this is spot on, it shows so much movement and power
ORIGINALITY:
Now I can't say much about the originality in this piece because I don't know ofFullmetal Alchemist, but since it is fanart i'll just give you 3 stars. It's very good fanart I might add
TECHNIQUE:
I love your technique so much, you're one of my fave artists on DA, mainly because you remind me so much of myself 3 years ago
IMPACT:
I think the impact is great! You can feel the tension between the two characters, and the vibes are great coming from the colour tones. All in all you've done very well!
I'm looking forward to your next pieces, keep up the great work champ! You rock!
-Pat
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